The Count St Germain
Alan SmitheePenpusher
An alchemist in 18th Century France, the charismatic Count St Germain, becomes an immortal assassin in a tale of revenge, redemption and adventure.
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I enjoyed the introduction of this character–an intriguing idea that left me wanting to know more. I was not able to understand what the movie would be about based on your description. If there was more information about why St. Germain is seeking revenge it would help to flesh out your logline. I am making the assumption that the redemption and adventure are unanticipated benefits of the character’s initial quest for revenge but if that is his motivation from the start I would like to know more about that as well. I hope you will make additional posts–I would enjoy hearing more of your ideas for this screenplay.
Thanks for the feedback! Seriously much appreciated. I will think about how to incorporate that “because” in there and then repost a new one.