When a young homeless woman is confronted by an evil older male blackmailer, who holds the key to her secret, she must choose between her dignity and a roof over her head. (this is for a scene, but I’m requested to submit a logline for it).

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thedarkhorse · Mentor · 3,495 pts

Posted this in the other one...

A woman trying to get her life back on track is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.

Idea - could make her counsellor the sex predator??

So what's it about? A woman regaining control over her life in more ways than one.

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Stop posting multiple loglines - only one a day.

Review at least two other users' loglines for each one of yours.

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savinh0 · Samurai · 2,300 pts

Why does the blackmailer hold the key for her getting a roof over her head? Is he rich or something? Does he offer her a roof in exchange for what?

As a reader, I have more questions than answers when I read this logline.

Also, you write that the man?holds the key to her secret.? That's too vague for a description.? Why does an evil old man blackmail a homeless person. Why is he interested in her?