A teenage loner meets his first love during lucid dreams and will have to choose between dream and reality, to be awaken without her or to never wake up.

Great concept, officialfrankromeo!

The funny thing is: I had the same idea years ago, as I dreamt about a girl I've never seen before and whom I fell in love with in my dreams.

I also posted a logline here on the website about it:

https://loglines.org/logline/after-a-shy-teen-falls-in-love-with-an-unknown-girl-he-dreams-of-every-night-he-sleeps-all-day-to-be-with-her-but-ultimately-he-has-to-overcome-his-shyness-in-order-to-find-a-real-girlfriend/

All the best with it!

I may try to write down my own take on it.

Great concept, officialfrankromeo!

The funny thing is: I had the same idea years ago, as I dreamt about a girl I've never seen before and whom I fell in love with in my dreams.

I also posted a logline here on the website about it:

https://loglineit.com/logline/after-a-shy-teen-falls-in-love-with-an-unknown-girl-he-dreams-of-every-night-he-sleeps-all-day-to-be-with-her-but-ultimately-he-has-to-overcome-his-shyness-in-order-to-find-a-real-girlfriend/

All the best with it!

I may try to write down my own take on it.

Okay...

A teenager meets the love of his life in his dreams - and must figure out a way to be with her, before/or else...

I think you need to lean into the specifics of what's going on.

I know you don't want to reveal too much in the logline - but you do need to get specific if you want it to pop/conjure up the correct images in the reader's head/be as strong and potent as possible.

Again - I do really love the concept.

Good luck with everything!

Keep working on it. The answer is always there. It's just hiding ;)