A high-end thief must execute an impossible heist to prove she didn’t murder her entire team before her crime boss father hunts her down.
Julien PerrottetPenpusher
A high-end thief must execute an impossible heist to prove she didn’t murder her entire team before her crime boss father hunts her down.
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I like it. I love the intrigue and the fact that it’s her father really got my attention.
1. How is performing a crime proof that she didn’t commit murder?
2. What is this impossible heist?
Keep going, take care.
Odie, thanks for taking the time! I’m not sure if either of those questions needs to be answered in the logline. I think the fact that you’re asking the questions indicated that I’ve delivered enough of a hook to get you to go and see it ha..maybe. If I answer the first question we are looking at unraveling a complex plot point and I answer the second I’m delivering too much detail. All this said I will go away and think about how it might look with those questions answered. Thanks again.
For me, on this site, I take two approaches – take a stab at the logline based on what’s there or workshop the thang. In this case, my questions were honest as I was unable to focus your plot points. But I get it and your response is fair, there are always folks on here looking for low-hanging story fruit 🙂
I wish you the best, take care.