A boy whose family was brutally murdered joins a squad of bounty hunters squad to free a community of women and children victims of a gang dedicated to making snuff movies.
AgustínPenpusher
A boy whose family was brutally murdered joins a squad of bounty hunters squad to free a community of women and children victims of a gang dedicated to making snuff movies.
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Brutal premise – dig it. This version directly ties the filmed murder of his fam to the gang.
“An orphaned boy joins a squad of zealous bounty hunters in order to seek revenge for the murder of his family by a vicious snuff film gang”
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
I agree with Odie, you should connect the inciting incident with the goal.
The gang that does the snuff films should be the gang that killed his family. (By that, I mean it should be in the logline)
Thank you so much guys. The gang is not the same. This occurs in a dystopian future where the forces of order no longer exist.