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A soon to be father must save the family he never wanted after his nephew is hospitalized by a gang destroying his family.
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I think you have a good idea, though you need to make it clearer to the reader as the words are a bit jumbled up. It also needs a bit more explaining, at least in a synopsis, because this confuses the reader and it’s hard to follow the idea. This way you can have a great logline!
This is what I’m able to glean:
A deadbeat dad must save his family from a ruthless gang.
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