Envious of the positive attention his new coworker receives from his colleagues and love interest , an arrogant, lazy (no work ethic, shortcuts) cheater male enrolls in a planned office marathon in order to get recognition from his office crush

by Melisa · Penpusher · 20 pts September 6, 2022 16 views

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Melisa · Penpusher · 20 pts September 7, 2022

Thanks Sonja. What prompts him is when an accomplished marathon runner joins the office and all the focus is on him.

Sonja · Wordsmith · 370 pts September 6, 2022

Love the concept and logline! What is the event that prompts the main character to put in all this work to impress his love interest? Why now? Can you add something that is last drop when it comes to his envy, and that gets him going? Great work!

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