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There's conflict, alright... But to me it feels more like a decision moment rather than a story. Is this a short film?
I would like to understand what to expect in the 2nd act of this story. What is our main character effectively DOING in this film?
I think the problem with this logline, it doesn't explain why he can't have both: Love and Crack.
Now if the love interest was a straight-edge stripper, then I could see there might be a conflict.
A few little changes and this logine should be fine. Good luck with this!
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