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EricaSamurai
Posted: May 1, 20162016-05-01T04:20:46+10:00 2016-05-01T04:20:46+10:00In: Fantasy

In a small town, an embittered young male struggles with the beliefs of a little girl who thinks the old man in a Santa suit is Santa while he robs a bank on Christmas Eve.

In a small town, an embittered young male struggles with the beliefs of a little girl who thinks the old man in a Santa suit is Santa while he robs a bank on Christmas Eve.
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    1. IDredMan Penpusher
      2016-05-01T04:24:33+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 4:24 am

      So it’s… A romance version of Bad Santa?

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    2. Erica Samurai
      2016-05-01T04:49:49+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 4:49 am

      Not really,? the girl is too young.? Maybe I should put that in the logline, an 8 year old little girl.? That doesn’t mean I can’t add a romance element with the girls mom.? I’ll have to explore that option.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2016-05-01T07:42:45+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 7:42 am

      But it will be compared to “Bad Santa”.

      Who is the main character? ?The young man or the old man? ?Or are they accomplices?

      And why would there be a struggle over beliefs in the mind of the young man? ?Why would he care what she believes? Doesn’t he have more urgent matters — the heist — on his mind?

      ?What is the young girl doing outside after dark? ?Why isn’t she home with her family on the most family-oriented night of the year?

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