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David Truasheim
Posted: March 22, 20132013-03-22T14:52:18+10:00 2013-03-22T14:52:18+10:00In: Public

When a young Dutch woman killed a group of Nazis with the Dutch resistance, they caused an entire town to be sent to a concentration camp, they must save their countrymen anyway they can.

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    1. Mark brennan
      2013-03-22T15:00:17+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 3:00 pm

      I dont think you need to say Dutch resistance, resistance would be fine. We already know shes dutch.

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    2. Daniel Helis
      2013-03-22T15:16:00+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 3:16 pm

      Poor choice of everything, you need to rethink your life

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    3. 2013-03-22T19:12:09+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 7:12 pm

      I’m not sure about all these loglines starting with “When”. I don’t think it’s the shorcut everyone hopes as it reads too formulaic.

      I think this is a workable concept. I’d posit it (something like) thus:

      “A young Dutchwoman has to save her friends and neighbours when they are sent to a concentration camp in revenge for her Resistance group’s success against the Nazis.”

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    4. 2013-03-22T19:12:57+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 7:12 pm

      That’s just an unhelpful dick of a thing to say.

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    5. Daniel Helis
      2013-03-22T21:31:31+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 9:31 pm

      yeah it was a joke i actually like this quite a bit

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