When a young tribesman is old enough to become a “man”, he is tasked to kill his first animal, or be outcast in his tribe. After internal debate, he decides not to take the life of an animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.

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>>>After internal debate, he doesn't kill the animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.

Is that how the story ends? ?If so, that part shouldn't be in the logline. ?A logline should raise a dramatic question, but it should never, ever give away the answer to that question, how the story ends.

>>>After internal debate, he doesn't kill the animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.

Is that how the story ends? ?If so, that part shouldn't be in the logline. ?A logline should raise a dramatic question, but it should never, ever give away the answer to that question, how the story ends.

What is the story about? ?Coming to his decision to be an outcast rather than kill the animal? ?Or what happens after he makes his decision and ?is cast out?

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