A witty half human, half dog character is discovered by a teenage boy and must kill the boy to protect his secret but instead befriends the boy.

The concept, while interesting, begs a question: ?how did this hybrid species comes to be?

It seems to me that although this is a comedy, the friendship needs a stronger motivation. ?Maybe something relating to the half-and-half's origins. ?Like maybe, he makes friends with the boy because he needs his help to find his genetic-engineer maker for some reason.

I dunno. Other than that the friendship should be more than incidental bonding . ?It should be motivated by a desperate need.

The concept, while interesting, begs a question: ?how did this hybrid species comes to be?

It seems to me that although this is a comedy, the friendship needs a stronger motivation. ?Maybe something relating to the half-and-half's origins. ?Like maybe, he makes friends with the boy because he needs his help to find his genetic-engineer maker for some reason.

I dunno. Other than that the friendship should be more than incidental bonding . ?It should be motivated by a desperate need.

Agreed with Dkpough1.
The stakes aren't clear what does he stand to lose or gain by befriending the boy? Accordingly what is his specific goal?