A timid orphan with an extraordinary gift, is horrified to learn that if she fails to defeat a powerful inter-dimensional being, she will be become his accomplice in the destruction of her world.

by zone4 · Initiate · 40 pts 756 views

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Former member · 114,968 pts

As Nir Shelter said. ?The "extraordinary gift" is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her "extraordinary gift"?

 

dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts

As Nir Shelter said. ?The "extraordinary gift" is vague; it needs to be specific. ??And what is the inciting incident which ?leads her to realize she must use her "extraordinary gift"?

 

Marcello Lanfranchi · Logliner · 220 pts

This certainly piques my interest, but I agree that the "extraordinary gift" should be described. I imagine it's something supernatural. What is the inter-dimensional being trying to accomplish? Why is only her world and not the entire world threatened?

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