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Great suggestion. Thanks.
Good premise for a low budget contained thriller, but the details of the plot seem unclear.
I strongly suggest re wording the logline to describe the plot with more clarity. Perhaps re think your descriptions from a different dramatic point of view specific to the MC?
My try:
After waking up in a cage a teen must win 12 rounds of a deadly game or be killed by the mad man who imprisoned her and the other 11 participants.
Must argue why she shouldn't be killed. It is a complex game.
There are a group of 12 people locked in a cage. Each round one will die, chosen by the group.. if they can figure out who the traitor is, they all go free.
Told through the eyes of a prisoner.