Seeing her father assassinated, Princess escapes to search the land for her exiled mother to learn the djinn arts to take revenge and save her people.?

I like Nir's ?version, too, because it gives the antagonist equivalent power. ??He's a sorcerer as knowledgeable the magical arts as must become. ?Consequently, ?just acquiring skill in the magical arts doesn't guarantee the princess inevitable success, make it a slam dunk that she will succeed.?

I like Nir's ?version, too, because it gives the antagonist equivalent power. ??He's a sorcerer as knowledgeable the magical arts as must become. ?Consequently, ?just acquiring skill in the magical arts doesn't guarantee the princess inevitable success, make it a slam dunk that she will succeed.?

I like Nir's version and relates to my point, by adding "... save the people" you not only get increased stakes, but a worthy goal as well.