Penpusher
Posted: 2016-11-12T11:10:25+10:00 In:

When a former child star escapes the city, a visit from her former agent with a once in a lifetime deal, she must decide to hide away or face fame one last time.

When a former child star escapes the city, a visit from her former agent with a once in a lifetime deal, she must decide to hide away or face fame one last time.
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    1. Singularity

      A ?logline is not about having to make a decision. ?Rather a logline is about what happens after the decision is made. ?Loglines are framed in terms of an objective goal the protagonist struggles to achieve.

      So, what does she decide to do? ?As a result of that decision, what becomes her objective goal? ?And what are the stakes?

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    2. Singularity

      Agreed with DPG.

      I would add personal stakes in form of (bit cliche’) drug or alcohol abuse. She ran away from a lifestyle that would eventually lead to her own demise.? Perhaps even make her broke and give her a sick parent (who naturally needs very expensive medication), this way she has more to lose than just fame if she says ‘no’.

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