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I understand about car trouble scenes being overused, but so are space scenes, mafia hits, etc. It's the movies- the original Home of the Cliche! You can still make an excellent story out of it.
I think the logline is very good, and has promise. I would clarify a bit more about "not what it seems". No time to be coy in a logline- let it all hang out. Whatever is going on in the town is your "hook", so don't save it for the read. You might never get a read with this logline as it stands.
Good luck!
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