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Amanda
Posted: April 15, 20132013-04-15T13:44:57+10:00 2013-04-15T13:44:57+10:00In: Public

Accused of ruining her sister?s wedding and future happiness, Annabelle must battle it out with her father who sees only the worst in her, leaving Annabelle more determined to leave the family grudges and insecurities behind her.

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    1. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-04-15T15:35:58+10:00Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 3:35 pm

      1)
      Who is Annabelle ??
      Include an occupation and weakness to identify the main protagonist.
      Names are usually reserved for historical figures of celebrities.

      2)
      What specifically is she battling ??
      In legally Blonde & Billy Madison they both have to prove
      their worth by attending school. Make it unique and specific to your story.

      3)
      What happens if she doesn’t leave the families faults behind her ??
      Maybe a good story piece would be to have something from her fathers past meet up with her.
      This could help in strengthening the relationship and ad conflict they have to overcome together.

      Hope this helps 😀

      Tor

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-04-16T07:22:42+10:00Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 7:22 am

      What is she fighting for (positive) — instead of against (negative)?

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