The Dane Axe
When a young Vikings village is destroyed, he must get help from the mysterious warrior only known as 'The Dane Axe' in order to get revenge on those who killed his family.
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This is an attempt to shorten your logline without taking anything away:
“After a young viking’s village is destroyed, He must enlist the mysterious warrior known as ‘The Dane Axe’ to avenge his family.”
However you also might want to tell us a little bit about who killed the family in the logline
Hope that helped. Good luck with this!
I think this logline “works” – all the elements are there, I think, but I’m not fully engaged to want to see it. I don’t know why, I guess it’s that elusive “hook”? Just some feedback, might not be shared by your audience in general.
“Seeking revenge, a novice viking hunts down his only hope; the mysterious warrior known only as The Dane Axe.”