With an uncanny ability to literally see the souls of his clients, a gifted portrait artist finds fame, fortune, and love; but when his true love escapes his grasp, he encounters a struggle to maintain his sanity while reclaiming his lost love.

I did follow the instructions. I actually used his suggestion. Though not here. I just hadn't updated it. Thank you, again.

As usual, Richiev has come up with a constructive reworking of the logline.

I agree with him that 1st and 2nd parts of the original logline version 1.0 didn't quite line up. However, I was able to conceive of a story line where they might have lined up very nicely.

Phoenixx50: what was your point in conceiving a situation where a character can have only 2/3's of it all: fame and fortune -- but not love?

As usual, Richiev has come up with a constructive reworking of the logline.

I agree with him that 1st and 2nd parts of the original logline version 1.0 didn't quite line up. However, I was able to conceive of a story line where they might have lined up very nicely.

Phoenixx50: what was your point in conceiving a situation where a character can have only 2/3's of it all: fame and fortune -- but not love?