A workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.
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A workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.
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Is the inciting incident the discovery of the pregnancy or the birth/ongoing motherhood? It’s hard to suddenly land in motherhood, unless her sister dies and she has to raise an already-born baby?
You should give us a stronger goal, or possibly some stakes.
“When she becomes pregnant on the verge of a promotion, a single workaholic business woman must complete a multi-Billion dollar merger, all while negotiating her pregnancy and ?a rival looking looking to take advantage of any misstep.”
Agreed with the above comments.
Adjusting to a new life is hardly material for a story, however, if she has a major obstacle to overcome as a result of the new life it could make for a story.
What is it she does as a result of the pregnancy? Or rather, what is it she wants and does as a result of the pregnancy?
This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable – adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.