When a shy courier, in a bad marriage, is allured by the friendly wife of a drug criminal, he pursues her help to overcome his social anxiety, despite exposure to his wife’s brother by police phone taps.

Best to try and take on board the previous comments by implementing them in the re drafts of the logline. Inject a clear goal motivated by an inciting incident with high stakes for the MC. Love story or not this concept lacks a hook of interest and needs more his brother in law and marital status are unrelated to the plot at hand and add unnecessary elements to the logline.

After falling in love with the wife of a notorious criminal a lonely shy courier must fight the criminal's mob to save his loves life.

The jeopardy is that he only faces defamation?? It seems to me the drug criminal would try to kill him when he finds out (and he will find out) -- that's the risk.

The jeopardy is that he only faces defamation?? It seems to me the drug criminal would try to kill him when he finds out (and he will find out) -- that's the risk.