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on A man must survive a holiday from hell with his wife’s crazy family when his dying father in-law decides to take the entire clan on one last holiday.

This seems pretty funny.
on When an extremely attractive but overly nice bar tender cannot find love, he then recruits his buddies to transform him into be a jerk, until he lands the girl of his dreams and loses her because of his new attitude

You should leave it ending with "...until he lands the girl of his dreams" It kinda leaves a clift hanger. Creates curiosity for whoever is reading it. Adding the last part kinda spoils everything.