Abdul Wasay

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on In a futuristic world where people are addicted to virtual realities,a cop who disapproves of such technology must plug himself in to save his only son when the system is hacked and threatens to kill all the people connected to it….only to find out his son is the mastermind behind the attack.

"technophobe" ...missed out on that.Giving away the plot twist in the logline was a silly thing.Will definitely keep those points in mind...Thank you so much.
on In a futuristic world where people are addicted to virtual realities,a cop who disapproves of such technology must plug himself in to save his only son when the system is hacked and threatens to kill all the people connected to it….only to find out his son is the mastermind behind the attack.

will definitely keep that in mind next time.Thank you.
on In a futuristic world where people are addicted to virtual realities,a cop who disapproves of such technology must plug himself in to save his only son when the system is hacked and threatens to kill all the people connected to it….only to find out his son is the mastermind behind the attack.

Thank you for the feedback,i appreciate it greatly.I am just starting out with writing my very first script and i am trying to get all the possible feedback i can on the idea,all your comments were extremely hepful...Thank you.