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on In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

Sounds like a great story and I like this logline. Romeo and Juliet work because of the irony.
on A retired homicide detective must figure out why everybody below the age of 65 have died at their computers, which are all running a pointless game where avatars are stalked and killed by a monster. To make matters worse there’s nobody left to run the nursing home, food is running out, and Mrs Everett needs to go to the bathroom.

Sounds like it could be an interesting story, but the log line is too long and confusing.