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on YOKO – Based on true events – Told from Japanese artist Yoko Ono’s perspective – The story of how she and Megastar John Lennon fell in love in 1966 and the incredibly powerful forces that tried to tear them apart.

Sounds more like a concept right now. A concept that is interesting, mind you. But within an inciting incident, it's hard to imagine the story.
on A 20th Century future king with the wisdom of King Solomon and the skills of Bruce Lee must overcome the evils of the royal family.

It seems to be missing an inciting incident.