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on A good looking law student’s privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he’s lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

Thank you so much for all the advise. I've never truly considering the importance of the log line - I'm definitely get it now. Okay, so the film starts with a girl being attacked by four guys in a forest.…
on A good looking law student’s privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he’s lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

This is helping loads. This better? "A golden boy law student struggles to overcome the sinister world of internet porn in order to save a girl."
on A good looking law student’s privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he’s lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

Both the inciting incident and the nature of how the main character gets involved are major twists in film.
on A good looking law student’s privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he’s lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

Thank you, that helps a lot. Struggling to give the reader enough info without giving away major twists in the plot.