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on In a rural town, when a young, naïve wife of an older, powerful cult leader becomes a secret prostitute, she discovers the town’s and cult’s dirty dark secrets that empower her to create a sex empire.

So does she become a madam? How does building? a sex empire help her get her son back? It sounds like she uses being a prostitute to get her adopted son back but why?? Is the son being held captive…
on An reluctant bride is caught between her soon to be husband and her best friend who is intent on her becoming his bride by any means necessary.

It is missing a little detail kinda like a backstory So if I were to say After? rejecting her best friend a newlywed bride must protect herself and her husband from a jealous friend who is intent on making her…
on A pugnacious princess from a dimension of ghouls gets banished to Earth for her constant mayhem to live with a cowardly nerd she protects.

I think it is not telling what the story is about. I have no idea what the story is about. I assume that it is about a princess who is banished to earth but why? Where is the conflict? I…
on A Rescue Story

I had an idea of using an amulet to be able to defeat the dragon after it killed his father. So something along the lines of.... After his father is killed by a menacing dragon , a cowardly farmer must…
on A former high school jock is thrust into duty to save his high school reunion after a prank turns his classmates into the living dead.

I was thinking a Seth Rogen type. The comedy kind of writes itself. You could even add possibly turn it into a buddy comedy as well. Two guys go back to their reuinion and end up battling the horde.
on A former high school jock is thrust into duty to save his high school reunion after a prank turns his classmates into the living dead.

I do see how it is not very specific. I also see where the issue is as their is nothing driving the story. I was throwing things around and came up with an idea. I had in mind that the…