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A group of high school kids discover how to time travel, but fail to recognize the potential consequences.
2/8/13 5.30am test.
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2366: Earth is on the verge of collapse and the wealthy Convert themselves into android bodies for life extension to travel to New Earth, 103 years away. When Conversion for a corrupt detective finds him malfunctioning on a garbage tip and his family nowhere in sight he has three days to repair his body, find his family and get on the ship to New Earth before it leaves.
Who is the protagonist, the corrupt detective?
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While on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 — One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.
If you are going to be pitching it, you really need an entire series logline because a network will want to know it has the potential for 5 to 7 seasons as that don't want to invest if it will…
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While on his first assignment covering a string of alleged UFO abductions, a tabloid journalist stumbles on what could be the story that makes his career when he discovers Point of Interest 9 — One of nine mysterious mansions that have sprang up across the globe over night.
Is this the logline for the pilot or the series? What you have here feels like it's either for a pilot or a season. Since this is for TV you should be selling your audience on the overall series, this…
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A lonely, abused housewife falls in love with the female police officer who responds to her desperate domestic 911 call. The wife, ultimately, convinces her female lover to plot to murder the controlling, ego-maniacal husband in order for the ladies to begin a new life together.
A clear plot that just needs to be trimmed down: "A lonely, abused housewife falls in love with the female police officer who responds to her desperate 911 call. In order to start their new lives together, the women plot…
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A forgotten pop music icon stuck in the past, stages his own death to generate a spike in record sales and takes on an alias as an underground rapper to avoid an aggressive fraud detective.
Thanks for the comments. Kriss: The Protagonist is stuck mentally in the past, struggling to hold onto fame. Although a weird time travel element could spice things up! Musegetes: Thanks for the suggestions. Edit: A pop music icon stages his…
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A ostentatious debt ridden rapper dreams of freedom, fortune and fame , but when his benefactor is murdered , wanted dead or alive he must ride the rap .
Not sure I understand "... he must ride the rap." Is it suppose to be along the lines of take the rap for?
