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on After their father commits suicide, leaving them for dead in the middle of the Nevada desert, 15-year old Sarah must lead her 6-year old brother Michael on a journey of survival back to civilization.

To quote the professor, "feel free to deviate as much as you'd like from the original." I actually really like your idea, and that would work much better than if I kept it in present day. The professor is Mark…
on After their father commits suicide, leaving them for dead in the middle of the Nevada desert, 15-year old Sarah must lead her 6-year old brother Michael on a journey of survival back to civilization.

Thanks for your reply! For a scene analysis class we are to pitch and write a beat sheet for the remake of this film, as if the professor is a studio exec, and it must take place in the USA.…
on A young woman must find a way to take down the sinister organization responsible for her sister’s murder and their plans to control a future, dystopian society.

Awesome reply, thanks! I only have the first act written out, and the midpoint scene of the second act written, and a vague idea of how the story ends. It will be fleshed out more during this semester; I'm pitching…