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on When a best friend dies and returns as a ghost, a human girl must determine if her best friend is who she says she is.

REVISED LOGLINE: When her best friend returns as a ghost, a lonely high school student must determine if her incorporeal best friend is who she says she is.
on In a utopia where all crimes are punishable by death, a teen gets accused of a crime they didn’t commit.

Maybe you could add some character description or maybe add more of an ACTION in the longline. But overall really good work Madi!!!!! <3
on In a utopia where all crimes are punishable by death, a teen gets accused of a crime they didn’t commit.

Great longline! I can really see the story come to life!
on When a best friend dies and returns as a ghost, a human girl must determine if her best friend is who she says she is.

Thanks for the feedback! :)