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on Paranoid Harry, a shell-shocked lieutenant, is sent to stop a general gone mad, commanding a nuclear missile silo, before he starts world war 3.

I immediately thought Dr. Strangelove on steroids. I'm not sure if that's good or bad. It seems the idea is contingent upon Paranoid Harry being a brilliant character, because its so forceful in the logline.
on When a prototype super-soldier goes rogue, he struggles to make his way home before the U.S. Army closes in and reclaims its property.

It's worded really well, but there's nothing in the logline that immediately makes it unique. We get the character, the conflict and the genre, but nothing that really pulls me into wanting to find out more about the script. Find…