DavidI

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on When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a corrupt politician. Coming to terms with the source will force the human race to address the deepest held beliefs and divisions in a world where there can be no secrets.

With the second half removed, the logline promises a great political thriller in store. While intriguing, you might want to consider reordering the first few words, i.e, "When a series of anonymous leaks" as opposed to "When an anonymous series…
on When a simulation algorithm predicts that in order to prevent a deadly attack his daughter must die, an assassin must betray his employers to save her.

I'd like to see this movie. The only suggestion would be to make it "When A prediction software" - for grammar and a better contextual feel. Otherwise, it's pretty damn good.
on When a former contender turned getaway driver finds love and tries to go legit, an Aryan Brotherhood kingpin who once derailed his boxing career threatens the mother of his unborn child to make him do one last job — one that comes with the ultimate price.

The logline above is the latest one, posted ?when I was trying to edit the previous one shown here below for comparison:?To save his family from an Aryan Brotherhood kingpin who once derailed his boxing career, a former contender turned…