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on Upon being marked by a shadow creature with a hunger for humans, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and forced to confront his identity or face losing himself.

Does this one read better? : After being marked by a ravenous shadow creature, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and with the help of an exotic strange woman, he is forced to confront his identity or face…
on Upon being marked by a shadow creature with a hunger for humans, a duplicitous man is exiled from his hometown and forced to confront his identity or face losing himself.

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