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on In a land where the dragons have been hunted to extinction, a timid young girl learns that she is the last Dragon Keeper – and has to find a way to bring the dragons back.

Yes questions have been the usual response to my loglines for this!
on In a land where the dragons have been hunted to extinction, a timid young girl learns that she is the last Dragon Keeper – and has to find a way to bring the dragons back.

Hmm I agree.
on In a land where the dragons have been hunted to extinction, a timid young girl learns that she is the last Dragon Keeper – and has to find a way to bring the dragons back.

Love this! Roadtested it on two guys who said my old loglines were not their kind of movie and they would both go to this movie with this logline! Think I'd shorten it to 'In a mystical land a young…
on A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

I think your original logline, is very strong and what you are classing as backstory is also a v strong film premise. You could have a trilogy in here. You seem to know the backstory really well, so don't dismiss…
on A man planning to commit suicide becomes the soul survivor of a commercial jet airline crash plus the investigations number one suspect as a terrorist involved in bringing the flight down but most importantly he is reborn, discovering the things in life he previously thought of no value: love, empathy & revolution.

I was intrigued by your original logline, and after reading Richiev's 2nd shot logline I'd want to see this. The irony of the suicidal man being the survivor and then being pursued as the possible terrorist makes it intriguing and…