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on A terrible storm tears apart a family moving their zoo across the ocean from Fiji to Australia, leaving youngest son Vilivo adrift at sea with only a dangerous Bengal tiger for company.

I know the goal is pretty clear, but I think it should be mentioned on the logline. This was my mistake too :S But good story!
on Joseph Adams discovers a form to fight his way out of debt by counterfeiting money in an honest manner, but little does he know, his son Brian, abuses the system and attracts the LAPD on their tails.

Fo sho! Let me introduce you to Mr. Benjamin's evil twin....
on After his plane crashes in the middle of the Amazon, a successful lawyer with no survival skills must find his way back to civilisation in time to donate his liver to his dieing son.

From one extreme to another! Can I book my movie tickets already? Haha
on A mentally troubled banker from Chicago finds himself hard to go by everyday due to his traumatic past, he manages the people who made him who he is now which leads him into a plot to sabotage there financial lives and turn his without being notice by the bank, the victim and overcoming his own greed.

Good story! But I think it's a little too long.
on When writing teacher Karels students start failing, he must kick it into overdrive in order to get his students to pass before the end of the Semester.

I hope I'm an extra in this one! I think aside from failing, there should be another main protagonist (the rebel student) to make it a bit more saucy :D
on Joseph Adams discovers a form to fight his way out of debt by counterfeiting money in an honest manner, but little does he know, his son Brian, abuses the system and attracts the LAPD on their tails.

Yeah I forgot to mention that he tries to stop his son and quit counterfeiting for good... /:
on From professional football player to professional coach he leads the top team to victory and breaks multimillion dollar contracts a long the way.

Sweet! Is there a main obstacle that the main character needs to overcome?