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on A jaded old exorcist and strident young atheist stalk a cynical self-help guru who claims she can create personal gods. After guru’s gods unexpectedly materialize and kill her at a small-town church seminar, the exorcist and atheist drop their debunking and fight their mutual distrust to get out of the church alive.

Love the rewrite! I think the exorcist is more vivid in my mind so I think that works. Thanks.
on In a future with anti-gravity tech, a gang of street-wise orphans help a celebrity “sky-runner” athlete accused of terrorism survive the planet’s deadly slums and destroy the cyborg general who framed him.

I'd like to be more emotionally drawn in. What are the motivations and consequences here? For instance, why did the cyborg general frame the sky-runner? Why do the gang of orphans rescue him? Maybe he's a sci-fi equivalent of a…
on A teenage girl saves the life of an old woman, who in return, grants the girl one wish — to be anyone but herself.

I like the premise, but I'd like to hear about a complication. Maybe the girl turns into someone famous, and the old woman becomes the girl! The former girl now has to make a difficult choice: continue with her enchanted…