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Thank you Nir Shelter for your input.?Gives me plenty of food for thought!
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Death wakes the couple up to their own mortality and to how their time is running out and sets them on this journey.
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Hi both, I have actually been trying to incorporate all the suggestions, but apparently it doesn't?read that way.I guess it is still not clear enough.The death and will is the inciting incident that shakes the wife into realising how fragile…
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Hi guys, I really appreciate all the feedback! It's really been helpful. To answer some of your questions: @ Nir Shelter: As for the motivation for the road trip, ?the will acts as a excuse for the wife to go…
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Thank you both for your really good feedback. I will think it over more based on your suggestions.
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THank you for your feedback! Will work on it more.