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When it’s discovered that John Wilkes Booth didn’t die at Garrett’s farm, the disgraced bodyguard, who abandoned his post to protect Lincoln, teams with an arrogant but trusted Texas Ranger to hunt down Lincoln’s killer.
Very Interesting!! The historical references make a very strong movie, and is also very personal, the bodyguard has to do it for honor, revenge and guilty, love that. Also i think movies that relay so well on a revenge are…
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As Mussolini’s marketing team assess the safety of a propaganda cliff jump he is about to attempt, they discover that their leader is afraid of heights.
i love comedies about that kind on "leaders" i dont know if you are italian but in my country, Spain, we had censorship till the 70's, and the only way to critizase was comedy, comedy not about the dictator but…
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as the black plague threatens the world once more, two female werecats fighting to save humanity discover their forbidden love for one another.
If these is for a pilot tv show, are you giving us the logline of the pilot or the season? It would help, as Richiev said before, a hint about how to be a werecat can help to save the…
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A young female werecat discovers she is in love with her best friend while trying to prevent the end of the world.
what its putting the world in risk? maybe the movie is about confront that specific conflict, Wich is the major event? Also if the love story its not directly implicated in the conflict or the goal its the "B" story,…
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When the daughter of a retired police officer is kidnapped by the son of an innocent man whom he sent to the death row, he must find the true culprit in order to obtain the release of her daughter before the day of the execution.
Thank you for the feedback! Thats very useful, it must be a short amount of time! Love the idea of the prosecuting attorney! It's very important in the story and it's other kind of enemy so the good guy must…
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When an idealistic boy tired of bullying establishes a secret club of victims to impart justice, some members of the group begin to turn into very dangerous bullies.
Thank you very much for the feedback! variable, i always thought about the protagonist to be part of bullied ones, but its not clear in the logline. Now it also makes me think about that the protagonist could be some…
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In a near future dystopian society, when a young adult genetic experiment wakes up in the middle of world war 3 as part of a new kind of army, she has to find out how to end it all.
why is she going to be the hero? wich are here stakes? If she wakes up in the future maybe she has less to lose than a person of that time.Maybe she can discover that the leader of the "bad…
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In a futuristic crime-free world rendered paralyzed by digital addiction, an alcoholic policeman, repurposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum social media popularity, must unravel the mystery behind his daughter’s kidnapping
Im totally agree with dpg, that world could be interesting but the conflict needs to be something original. In Minority Report he has to discover why himself is going to kill somebody, thats a conflict unique in that world. Im…
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When a brutal warrior is blinded in a fight, he must go with the woman he tried to save to a magic river to get his eye sight healed before they’re both hunted by a cannibal tribe.
Hi! He has to heal his vision, but then? Is he going to confront the cannibal tribe? I think the blind issue is an obstacle not a goal, the goal could be to save the princess but what does he…
