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on God did not abandon man after his fall. On the contrary, God calls him and in a mysterious way heralds the coming victory over evil and his restoration from his fall. This is the first announcement of the Messiah and Redeemer, of a battle between the serpent and the Woman, and of the final victory of her descendant – Jesus Christ.

When the women loses the fight against the serpent, God forces upon himself to call the man while pretending he abandoned him to force Messiah the Redeemer to make first announcement that battle has been won by Jesus Christ.
on Young Kenny becomes an orphan moves to live with her uncle in the village, faces harsh treatment. Her emotions- fear, anger and sadness conflicts on how best to navigate a new environment.

When (personality trait, like ambitious) Kenny becomes an orphan living under oppressive uncle in rural village, she takes on (education, some challenge) in order to escape and (goal - live free, independence, or threat - she will suffer if she…
on When corporate spy infiltrates a fanatic cult which overthrew a deep space mining colony, he finds a mind altering alien artifact capable of conjuring world-destroying monster.

I have borrowed a synopsis from Wicker man When a young girl mysteriously disappears, Police Sergeant Howie travels to a remote Scottish island to investigate. But this pastoral community, led by strange Lord Summerisle, is not what it seems: the…
on When corporate spy infiltrates a fanatic cult which overthrew a deep space mining colony, he finds a mind altering alien artifact capable of conjuring world-destroying monster.

Thanx I see what you mean. The mambo jumbo I have made - In order for human to be infected, he has to touch the object (even although object has been whispering to people to lure them in and main…
on When corporate spy infiltrates a fanatic cult which overthrew a deep space mining colony, he finds a mind altering alien artifact capable of conjuring world-destroying monster.

Posting again as it wasnt sent as a reply: Ah, thanx mate 🙂 Nice to still see you around. And yeah, your makes more sense and sounds more exciting. I just thought that it would come as an obvious thing…
on When corporate spy infiltrates a fanatic cult which overthrew a deep space mining colony, he finds a mind altering alien artifact capable of conjuring world-destroying monster.

Ah, thanx mate :) Nice to still see you around. And yeah, your makes more sense and sounds more exciting. I just thought that it would come as an obvious thing that he must destroy it or monster will destroy…
on After her retired client dies, a social worker risks her life when she discovers a fake agency luring properties from pensioners in exchange for a till-the-end-of-their-life home care. (latest update)

This is the original logline that I am posting here for a reference. When one of her retired client dies, a social worker uncovers a secret world of horrifying aged care business involving fake real estate contracts, abuse and murder.…
on After her retired client dies, a social worker risks her life when she discovers a fake agency luring properties from pensioners in exchange for a till-the-end-of-their-life home care. (latest update)

Maybe this makes more sense?After?one of her retired clients suspiciously dies, a social worker puts her life?at risk when?she?discovers a?fake agency luring properties from pensioners in exchange for a till-the-end-of-their-life home care.Thats?36 words. Let's see if I can short it…
on When a teenage girl has her robot’s algorithm stolen by her mentor, the only way to expose the truth to is to compete against him at an International Robotics Competition, and win a grant to develop the tech that will allow her paralysed mother to paint again.

Man I think that you may have perhaps fallen into a trap that I got into myself many times. You design a story or idea in your head and then you are trying to create a logline for it. If…
on A young, teen girl designs an app to control a robot that can cure paralysis, but when her disabled mother falls seriously ill, and her mentor plagiarises her design and sells it to a multi-national, the only way to expose the truth is to compete against them at an International Robotics Competition.

And yes, the setup doesnt much work - algorithm + patenting of it + urgency of mother dying ... putting it all together to make the device / treatment seems to be lengthy process. More likely the girl (I can;'t…