jonnyone

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on Jesus is alive…but the Church wants him dead

I love the idea of this being a comedy. But do agree with the need to flesh out the logline. I love the premise and the instant attraction it brings, leaves you wanting to know so much more. Perhaps you…
on Following a high school reunion a man seeks forgiveness from a childhood sweetheart who he wronged 15 years prior. She however has plans for revenge and will stop at almost nothing to ruin his perfect life.

i think you're spot on. single sentence it is. thanks so much. just the interesting part now....