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on An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the ‘Bodyguard’. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to ‘watch him’ and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

Richiev thank you for taking the time to respond. I do not know Roxy Carmichael but will look her up. some of the themes of the film would be the lack of resources in rural towns.. I do like your…
on An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the ‘Bodyguard’. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to ‘watch him’ and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

Good afternoon...I was wondering about the whole KC thing and being able to use it, decided that if I use a lookalike I would be able to get around it....Thank you for bringing this to my attention..... I am going…
on An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the ‘Bodyguard’. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to ‘watch him’ and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

Phil..thank you for your feedback, I have a copy of Save the Cat at home and haven't read it...I will. I will keep your feedback and have another go at the logline..Have a good one.
on An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the ‘Bodyguard’. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to ‘watch him’ and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

Jeff Thank you for your reply, I am still working on the story and how to make it work and I guess it shows in this logline... Cheers