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on “For reliable Riley Duncan, the weeks between spring break and prom prove that the lessons of love and life learned on the back of pickup truck, a dumpster dive, and from one strange Echo will become the events he’ll retell for a lifetime.”

"A cow, a dumpster and a visitor from the East are just some of the things Riley Duncan has to navigate in his search for love, but a lone Echo produces a sound that even love may not conquer."
on “For reliable Riley Duncan, the weeks between spring break and prom prove that the lessons of love and life learned on the back of pickup truck, a dumpster dive, and from one strange Echo will become the events he’ll retell for a lifetime.”

Thanks fellas...rewrite coming...
on “After a struggling writer’s sister is kidnapped by deranged script writer, he’s given 24 hours to create the perfect logline for the maniacs new screenplay, or his sister dies!”

I resemble this logline....
on “Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?”

Like I said, I'm no expert, but do you need the whole, "U. S. DoD PsyOps Division", seems almost too Clancy.
on “Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?”

I know I am NO expert, so take this for what it's worth. It seems wildly specific with the "DoD" line...kinda loses me.
on When his lover is murdered during their routine work on a land deal, attorney and legal historian Charles Aden must penetrate a centuries old legal quagmire of lies and betrayal to bring her modern day killer to justice.

It sounds like Charles would be the number one suspect...like to see the character avoid that scenario.