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on When a top assassin falls for her latest target, she must switch from killer to bodyguard to stay alive long enough to turn the tables.

I was unsure how much value I'd get from a review of a logline, but this is great! All really valid and insightful points being made. Thanks everyone. The more I develop the story, the more I veer away from…
on When a top assassin falls for her latest target, she must switch from killer to bodyguard to stay alive long enough to turn the tables.

These are all very good points dpg. I think I need to add further detail to her back story that does allow for a quick turn around like that. After the suspicious death of her family when she was a…
on When a top assassin falls for her latest target, she must switch from killer to bodyguard to stay alive long enough to turn the tables.

This is my first logline here. Should we also post a short synopsis so people can seek answers in there too, or is it all about the logline? I'm intending for a RomCom with this. I can imagine two people…