Sara Pensalfini

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on When a terminally ill dancer becomes part of a radical treatment group, she uncovers the deadly secrets of a renegade oncologist and must battle to save more lives than her own.

Thank you Jean-Marie. The hero IS a young mother, so that works. Funnily this script, is far less developed than the other I have posted a logline for- but it seems to feel tighter. Partly, I am trying decide which…
on A forensic photographer on stress leave takes the pilgrimage home, only to become embroiled in a cold case from her youth. What she discovers is her worst nightmare. What she finds is redemption.

Thankyou! Definitely helps. Will rework on this basis after lunch. ;)