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After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state’s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.
Creative spaces ?are indeed the way to go. Thank you all creatives for your reviews, you have helped tremendously. ?After your last notes I had to make some serious adjustments to the screenplay which by the way I have completed.…
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After famous NASCAR racer dies, his son, an up-and-coming auto racer falls into alcoholism. With sponsors pulling their support and his money dwindling, friends and family try to help the son overcome his depression in time for his next race.
Agreed with the points above. The son is supposed to be a protagonist but his friend and families are the ones who are active. What does he want? What is his objective goal? Once you have identified these, the friends…
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When hunting season nears for the 20th time in his career, a miserable assassin enrolls in his pregnant wife’s yoga and pilates class to rediscover a desire to kill.
I think this would be an interesting movie to watch. I quite like it. However, I can't quite understand the first part of the logline, has he not been able to kill all along in the previous seasons that he…
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A 17 year old punk, with dreams of becoming a professional MMA fighter, comes to terms with his rage, while looking after a deaf blind boy in a rough underclass community.
Saying he has a dream of becoming... makes it a passive thing. What is his objective goal? to become a fighter? it has to be more active than just a dream. Is he fighting for his dream to come true?…
