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on A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

Thank you for your clarifying questions! I'll incorporate their answers into the revision of the logline.
on A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

Great points. Thank you for the feedback!
on After bring left for dead, an immortal fighter comes out of retirement starts a underground fighting promotion and goes after those who killed him with his fists.

Echoing Richiev sentiments, the protagonist does sound like bad guy. There are a couple of typos as well that make for a less than smooth read.
on A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

A short narrative film.