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on A confident police chief in the Texas Hill Country finds a diary and discovers his entire life has been based on lies and deception, but the battle to dig through the past and unravel the truth becomes dangerous and could cost him his job, his family, and his sanity.
on A confident police chief in the Texas Hill Country finds a diary and discovers his entire life has been based on lies and deception, but the battle to dig through the past and unravel the truth becomes dangerous and could cost him his job, his family, and his sanity.

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on A confident police chief in the Texas Hill Country finds a diary and discovers his entire life has been based on lies and deception, but the battle to dig through the past and unravel the truth becomes dangerous and could cost him his job, his family, and his sanity.

Hey Ruthie.I think this is really strong. It's active, tension is there.?Your logline is?nice and compact. But it's also a bit language dense.?Two words to think about removing/revising....1) 'Confident': Years of story that's come before you tells us that a…