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on A witty half human, half dog character is discovered by a teenage boy and must kill the boy to protect his secret but instead befriends the boy.

I like this log-line. It creates intrest for the story but also explains how the dog-man changes in perosnality. Well done!
on When a young tribesman is old enough to become a “man”, he is tasked to kill his first animal, or be outcast in his tribe. After internal debate, he decides not to take the life of an animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.

When a young tribesman is old enough to become a ?man?, he is tasked to kill his first animal, or be outcast in his tribe. After internal debate, he doesn't kill the animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.