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Maybe... Although the name of the victim turned killer is known, so there's no mystery there.
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I like this is the most out of your three as well, but it risks being dangerously close to being "Super". Why does np he need to protect his neighbourhood... Hope this helps.
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A little long... Seems to be missing an ending,
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I think this explains the plot better: "When a suicidal girl meets an inmate calming to be a superhero, she must save him before his nemesis can gain control of his powers."